1.) Something very odd: The man is the dark purple coat gave me the phone he said “its for you”. 2.) Use direct speech:” She is hurt.”my mom yelled “what” I said the phone then cut out.3.) The the middle of something:Swish as I kicked the soccer ball into the net mky coach yelled your mom is on the phone.4.) Make the reader laugh While my friend Carlos was running he tripped hitting his head on the bench. I laughed so hard I peed my pants.5.) Talk to the Reader:Sisters, people say they are annoying, but my sister no way. My sister was my best friend.6.) Shock your reader: ”Barcelona’s rookie Eduardo Fabregas GONE” I read the title over and over again in my head while in the Mexican airport. Ahhhhhhhhhh I screamed and threw the paper at the old man reading the same newspaper beside me. The man jumped up from his seat and pushed me down on to the ground. I sat there pondering about my sister.***best i could do for this** **may be off the topic of shock your reader**7.) Create a tense atmosphere“Eduardo! It’s Maria she, she is hurt.” “What” I screamed. My mom was trying to keep me from going nuts. She told me my younger sister Maria was in a car accident and that i should come back to Mexico because she is in critical condition. I hung up before I could say by to my mom. As I walked out of my coaches office tears were running down my face. This is the first time i have cried since I was 11. 8.) Create a clear picture:Alone sitting in the dark kichen, Eduardo filled with sadness cries softly and sliently. He falls back onto the wooden stool and weeps like he has never before. Eduardo thought i was wrong when men cried but today it was an exception.Eduardo drags himself into the dark living room shouting and screaming with terror. Eduardo collapses on the hard wooden floor hitting his head against a desk. He still cries. He cried so much that day he could have filled a large jug full of his tears. He Cried for 3 hours that day.
When my character returns to Spain he then gets fired. His sister dies and when he goes back to Spain in four months he gets fired from being a professional soccer player because Barcelona has found a new player that will replace him.
How does that happen? What your character wants creates the problem or conflict in the story. What sequence of events leads to the resolution of that conflict?
The player that Barcelona choose to be on his team turns out to be a complete FAIL. No other team wants him any more so he heads back to Mexico. When he arrives in Mexico he is lost, looking for another dream. He finds a little produce store to work at. While walking on the street he comes across some kids playing soccer with a tin can. He works at the produce store for 1 year thinking about his lost sister and his soccer career. His hair hasn’t been cut and he looks miserable. While walking the the store a kid kicks the can to him and says in spanish ” hey, Wanna play some soccer”. Eduardo’s eyes light up and he runs to his house and picks up one of his best soccer balls. He then gives it to the kid. He shows him how to play and then becomes a coach for a school
Your character wants one thing more than anything else in the world. It doesn’t have to be something big or special that anyone would want. It could be something insignificant that only your character cares about. Whatever it is, it’s something that will motivate your character to do almost anything to get it. And that’s what makes your story interesting. So, what one thing does your character want more than anything else in the world??
My character wants to be a professional soccer player. He is going to play his first game soon. Then he believes he will be the next Theirry Henry or Cesc Fabregas.Then he figures out that his sister got in a car accident and is in critical condition. He goes and sees his sister. The one things he wants more in the world is to be a professional soccer player.
My characters name is Eduardo Sanchez. He is 18 years old.
What does this person look like?
Eduardo has short brown hair that is never combed and always sticking up. He has piercing blue eyes. He is 6 feet tall and is very muscular. He always wears his blue baseball cap with his favorite hockey team the Vancouver Canucks on the front. He is slightly tanned and his background is Mexican.
What is your character’s life like and how does he or she feel about it?
He just finished high school and is he is playing for FC Barcelona in Europe. He is very smart and he is a pro soccer player. He has a younger sister named Maria. Eduardo has lots of friends. His family is a lower middle class family. Eduardo loves his life. He lives in Barcelona Spain. He is also a happy.
What does your character like to do?
Eduardo loves riding his motorcycle. Eduardo loves to ride his 1985 Honda Motorcycle. He loves his motorcycle to get away from all of the work and stress. He loves playing soccer. He owns a Spanish restaurant in down town Barcelona called “el mago loco” which means the crazy magician. He loves work. He has many friends that work their that are also from Mexico. On his spare time he would be playing poker with his friends, playing soccer, Playing basketball, or riding his motorcycle.
How does you character get along with others?
He has many friends. He loves his family so much. At school he is known as known of the best soccer players. He played for his school soccer team last year and scored 4 goals in the finals to win the high school soccer championship. He gets along with everyone. He now plays for Fc Barcelona. He is playing his first game for them soon.
My characters name is Carl but he like to be called “Da Boss” because he like to bully kids. He is 17years old
What does this person look like?
Carl or “da boss” has big lumpy greasy hair that rolls down to his shoulders in an awkward way which he never combs. His eyes are very dreamy and are a mixture between gold and brown. His has really fuzzy eye brows but it goes with his lumpy hair. He has slightly tanned skin. He is taller and stonger than all of the other kids at school. He never ties his shoe laces and often trips because of them. When somebody laughs at him for tripping he beats them up. He always and I mean always wears his favorite jacket that has G-UNIT written on the back in big shiny white letters.
What is your character’s life like and how does he or she feel about it?
He hates teachers and people who try and boss him around because he believes he is “the boss’. He loves to control what people do. He is very stubborn. He is concidered a bully at school. He hates school with passion. He hangs out with a group of 3 kids that are all really big, tough (tuff), and strong. His friends are named Jamal, Andre, and Bison. He LOVES girls. He used to have a girl firend which he broke up with because she moved to LA.
What does your character like to do?
Carl and his possy love to pick on kids who are smaller than he is. He gets into many fights at school. He has moved from 4 different schools all because of explusion. He often falls asleep which the teachers love when he does. He HATES techers and always makes fun of them. His teachers can’t often control his behavior so they send him to the principles office. Even that doesn’t help him learn his lesson. At home he is just as bad. He swears, spits, yells, and talks back to his parents. He always gets sent to his room but he sneaks out through the window in his room and goes to Bison’s house across the street. He plays hockey on the weekends and gets into a fight every game. He is so good, big and strong that he plays with 19 year olds. He has a little brother that he treats really nicely. He loves his little brother and he always plays football and soccer with him in the back yard.
How does you character get along with others? And so on.
He hates his teachers, his parents, coaches, little kids, and other people who try and boss him around. he loves his younger brother, his friends, and girls.
Yes, he can. Physicits at the Institute of Theoretical Astrophysics in the University of Oslo, Norway have proved that he could run faster if he didn’t showboat at the end. Usain ran 100 meters in a world record time of 9.69 seconds. If he didn’t showboat he could have ran it in 9.55 seconds. I think it is really stupid to showboat in a track race. He could have saved the chest pounding for after he finished the race. What if he was pounding his chest and the guy in second place passed him. That would have made Usain Bolt feel really stupid.
Showboating can be a good thing and a bad thing. For instance making a huge hit in hockey, making an around the back pass to your team mate in basketball while you have no defender on you, or even just taking your shirt off when you scored a goal in soccer when you are already up 7-0. Usally when you try and show off it will lead to you screwing up and everybody making fun of you like I am going to with Zach Randolph. To view a movie of how stupid Showboating can be, click the link below…
I can also proably bet you almost everyone reading this article can say they have show boated before. Do you think showboating is stupid? Please give me your response!
Hello all and welcome to my new and improved 2009 English blog. My name is Malcolm. You may know me from reading my english blogs last year. You can see all the posts I did last year in the post before this. This Blog will be for english.
Nate Robinson who is one of the shortest guys in NBA standing at 5 foot 9 inches blocked 7 foot 5 Yao Ming. Now people say that short people cant play basketball and only Tall people can’t, well it isnt true. Take a look at the video below.
I think Yao ming didn’t get hurt. I think he was trying to make it look like a fowl so people like me wouldn’t critosize him. The thing is it’s a clean block.
The Canucks aka the Nucks have there season is there hands right now as they are playing the Edmonton Oilers. The score is 2-1 Edmonton as Alex Burrows just scored. There is 1 minute and 45 seconds left in the game. Henrik Sedin just got caught for hooking with 1 minute and 18 seconds. Bye Bye Canucks is what I am thinking. Louongo does to the bench. 5 on 5. Burrows centers for Edlar and he missed the net. Penalty to Edlar and the season is over for the Vancouver Canucks. Thanks Canucks for a great season.
